Regarding Leia, I was toying with the idea of sliding the shots of her around a bit, so that her hand collapses as Rey is healing Ben. Then it would be like Leia is sending her lifeforce to Ben (through Rey) in order to save him; rather than Leia just “losing the will to live.” So that could also make Rey’s inner conflict more interesting - she was able to save Ben, but she basically had to condemn Leia to do so.

EDIT: hinventon, what are your thoughts on removing Luke’s line about being afraid?