Sooo, this sequence took a while, but luckily its the last (and most difficult) link sequence. It takes the story from The Tragedy to The Rescue (The Believer has been cut).
I have changed the sequnces at the end of The Tragedy and start of The Rescue, and altered most of the dialogue between Mando and Cara on Nevarro.
This just leaves the opening sequence to sort, and tidying up of the landing on Trask. A version for test viewing will be available soon.
That looks good! I would maybe put the recruitment of Bo Katan prior to the message to Gideon, as it feels a little too ping-pong between the Empire and Mando.
Part of why that hologram from Mano works so well in the episode is because they stole the info, but without The Believer, and it just being Cara Dune and a Google search, it doesn’t really warrant the astonishment from Gideon that he’s been found/contacted. You might be able to delete that scene entirely. If you did, Dyn could recruit Cara before Gideon intimidates Grogu, after Boba commits to helping him.