Looks like I missed quite a bit here!
I’m fine with not using the line we created. At least we were able to test out what it would sound like if it were inserted.
I’m glad Hal is sticking with fear keeping him there. My understanding of it is that he was afraid of talking to his sister after what he did to her son. He was also afraid that the galaxy’s expectations of him were too great and that he would end up failing again. Both are definitely fear based.