Sherlock, you’re an absolute madman. lmao.

Personally speaking, I’m a fan of Option 4 with a little bit of Option 2 thrown in (I LOVE the interrupting Rey idea). However, like Hal, I still think the “It was fear that kept me here” line should still be in it. I’m about as much of a TLJ fanboy as you can ever find (having had MANY heated arguments with my anti-TLJ friends about it). With that said, I’ve never really had a problem with that line and I don’t think it really goes against anything Johnson was doing in his film. Also, I understand what you’re going for with the pause. But as it stands in each clip you posted, it just seems kind of awkward. I think it would just be best to keep the line intact where it’s at.

Another criticism I have is that the “Lesson Three” line in the fourth clip sounds a bit wonky to me. Oddly enough, I didn’t notice it sounding so weird in the third clip. But it’s definitely noticeable in that last one.

Anyways, good job on doing all that work though! It’s nice to actually see these options are like playing out rather than just talking about them.