Alright here that is:
If this doesn’t sound natural then this probably isn’t going to work anywhere else.
If the word Rey was removed. The line has room to breathe and I think it works
Post #1415940
- Author
- ThisIsCreation
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1415940/action/topic#1415940
- Date created
- 8-Mar-2021, 6:30 PM