Post #1415879

Author: Jar Jar Bricks
Parent topic: The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1415879/action/topic#1415879
Date created: 8-Mar-2021, 4:12 PM

I agree as well, but that’s slightly out of my talents haha.

I tried your new line and it sounds completely natural now. But it does feel a little squished. Needs some space to breath.