Yeah I just thought I’d share that because it directly relates to the chapter you just shared.
I agree that it’s best to leave things between Lando and Jannah alone. But I do feel it would be an interesting concept for these ex-stormtroopers to try and piece together where their real family is. Like searching the First Order databases to see where they were taken from, etc.
But ultimately that is accomplished with Jannah alone, just thought it might be interesting to extend it to Finn.
I like the idea for the interaction between Jannah and the newly-defected stormtroopers earlier in the thread, and I think I’m going to try and set it up to imply Lando and Jannah are going to lead the whole group of them on a “let’s find out where you’re all really from” mission, while also figuring out their own personal ones. There’s something nice to me about the idea of those two going off on further adventures, searching for something meaningful, and with a team of new friends they’re going to get to know along the way.
I generally leave a bit of time between finishing a chapter and sharing it here, so I’ve got some distance from it before opening it up to feedback. I find it helps me look at it clearer. Right now, for instance, I’m up to chapter 11 (what was formerly chapter 10 before I restructured some of the chapters).