I always quite liked it due to the tartakovsky charm, even though it doesn’t mesh with the rest of the media so nicely, but on this rewatch for the sake of editing it just now, I found the voices so jarring compared to TCW. Anakin is at maximum whine, the Clones are American, and Grievous is completely different. You’re also missing some opportunities to use more of the franchise’s music - the TCW clone theme, subtler music than the Imperial March, etc. The main reason I’m including it at all is really to introduce Ventress and Grievous.
One thing this has reminded me to mention, is that I’ve taken these episodes now as far as I intend to myself, but I’m absolutely open to collaboration with anyone else who has any ideas about better ways to present them. If someone wanted to take a stab at changing the music/audio/voicework, or had ideas for restructuring beyond what I’ve done, or trims to what I’ve retained to better match TCW’s characterisation, I consider them an open community project.