Did a quick pass on replacing Luke’s “fear” with “shame,” mainly because I was curious about the idea. I could work it some more, but…
I really do like it in theory, but I don’t think it’s as critical as Dyad was. It’s also going to be harder to blend in, given A) Lack of music or background noise, B) The dialogue sounding more natural/unprocessed than Kylo’s was, and C) The lip syncing issue.
Is it worth pursuing?
EDIT: I could also only find one instance of Mark saying “Shame.” I tried to manipulate it a bit to avoid it sounding copy/pasted, but I’m not sure how well it works.