Y’know, Dominic, those two ideas could potentially be dynamite. “I will earn your family’s saber” would be amazing, and “birth of her son” does have a nice double-meaning irony to it. Huh. If anyone can execute those I’d say they’d be welcome inclusions.
Years of YouTube Poop lead me to avoid sentence-mixing for these things, so I don’t want to overdo it!
Thankfully both are spoken off screen so that’s at least one part of the equation we don’t need to worry about.