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Post #1414457

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Jar Jar Bricks
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
3-Mar-2021, 4:51 PM

jarbear said:

The line sticks out since it sounds a bit different, but it also sticks out since its cramming more words than the “space” of the original line.

I dunno if it is realistic to do cleanly.

Exactly.

So I suppose this question is for everyone else to chime in on: do we think it’s worth it to include this line change while making it sound augmented/strange at the same time? I know what my answer is at this point (I’d rather not have it).

Of course, Hal kinda has the final say.