sherlockpotter will solve this or it’ll just remain poop.
Oh god, Hal himself just hinged the success of whole project on me. Fuuuuuu…
How does this sound for a v2 of the line? If it’s not perfect yet, let me know; but I’ve been listening to the same two seconds of audio for the past few hours, and I’m starting to lose objectivity. I’ve heard it so many times - and I’m hyper aware of where the different seams are - that I’m not sure if it sounds fluid or not. I need an fresh set of ears!
I’ve added an extra layer to smooth the transition a little more, re-pitched a couple of syllables, and I’ve been shuffling the different pieces around by a few thousandths of a second to make it flow better. Thoughts? Be brutal.
Sherlock, could you please post your final clip for everyone in a WAV file? Excellent work.
Also when you say you “added an extra layer” what does that mean precisely?
Whoops, sorry. Sent the line to Hal in a PM at first. Here’s the link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jOfypfXSDVkf7Z0p2xVB2ktg0RfwdxRW/view?usp=sharing
So, the extra layer was kind of weird. One of the problems I noticed was that there was a harsh cutoff between “become” and “A DYad”. I tried just lowering the volume of “A DY” a bit, but it still sounded uneasy to me. So I isolated the “mm” sound from “become” and layered it in a bit sooner. Then I blended it in with the “A” sound more. The end result (hopefully) was that it would go phonetically from “become. a Dyad.” to “become [ma] Dyad.”
Rather odd all around. I’m glad that it seems to have worked!
This is really good. I have 2 issues though unfortunately.
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When Kylo says ‘‘we’ve become a dyad’’; The word we’ve has a clipping sound to it, i listened with my headphones and it’s pretty noticeable.
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After he says dyad the line in the force seems to not flow as well as it could. You did a great job.
I took your clip and i made 2 versions.
In audio One, i removed the clipping & tried to make the line ‘in the force’ fit a bit better.
In audio Two, i removed the clipping & removed the line ‘in the force’ to see if it flowed better.
anyway, here you go
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1VBMI4WJAO3izMPu8L5a-r3D4Pk0X16BR?usp=sharing