The reason we made it “What Palpatine doesn’t know is we’ve become a dyad in the force” is because we are currently following the philosophy that Palpatine is aware they have had a mind bridge, however is not aware of their dyadness. Making those changes would arguably undo the entire point of the “become a dyad” change.
Back to the Palpatine line, you were right Hal. There is too much music attached to all the character’s speaking. I removed a significant amount of it, but you can still hear it unfortunately.