Yeah and removing Snoke’s line begs the question of how he could have anticipated it. It’d be trading one problem for another.
I explained earlier that Snoke could be thinking one of two ways: 1. He knows they have some sort of connection already and is anticipating it to be a useful tool in bringing Rey to him 2. He doesn’t know about their connection but assumes that somehow they will get in contact with each other and result in bringing Rey to him. Of course, that isn’t thought out as well.
At least with this problem I have the capability of overlooking it. Not so much with the other side.
Anyways, I agree, it’s probably best to just take a break for now. I would say put in Kylo’s “become” and that’s about it. I’m probably going to stick with removing Snoke’s line, but it definitely isn’t for everyone, and therefore should not be in your edits.