Alright Hal, I don’t know if you’re cooking up the changes we discussed yesterday but I decided I might as well share what I was talking about here. This is the Palpatine/Rey interaction without “for my grandchild to come home” and “I never wanted you dead”. Obviously the audio could use a little bit of work but I think the conversation still makes a lot of sense:
“Long have I waited… Empress Palpatine… you will take the throne.”