It would have been nice if the palpy and pryde scene was longer and could have had palpy day something like “kylo has betrayed me/ no longer part of plan / etc and it’s time for plan b.” Something like that would have been nice or at least connect some dots.
But I agree removing those lines helps.
Palpatine already says, “The Princess of Alderaan has disrupted my plans, but her foolish act will be in vain.”