lol, and we’re sure all this is the better option than Snoke just not knowing her identity and Palps never wanting her dead? (half-kidding)
I’d say so, for real, at least because he seems to want her dead at the start of TROS. And bonus points for keeping it practically Snoke = Palpatine.
And I imagine simply removing Palpatine’s line “I never wanted you dead, I wanted you here” even though it could be interpreted as him improvising and lying. The rest can be theatrics; “Oh, it’s my wonderful granddaughter please help me with something.”