I think some of the ideas you have in this edit (namely Rey killing her parents and Kylo blowing up Corellia) are ABSOLUTELY inspired.
Would I be able to get a copy of this?
Honestly, Rey killing her parents is my favorite thing, followed by removing the ghosts from the end. The destruction of Corellia also helps to establish the FO as a threat early on without having to have Palps there from the get go.
There’s a lot about this edit I really like and plan on incorporating in some fashion in my own edit.