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Post #1411091

Author
CaptainFaraday
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker Expanded Edition by Rae Carson: The Faraday Edit (WIP)
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Date created
17-Feb-2021, 8:56 PM

Hal 9000 said:

CaptainFaraday said:

Hal 9000 said:

I guess that POS finally just had something really break.

Technically, there’s nothing stopping me from having Poe say this after they crash…

“And then Poe yelled, ‘GOD FUCKING DAMNIT PIECE OF BULLSHIT,’ as he kicked the Falcon’s console, fracturing his ankle.”

From then on, he stays aboard the Falcon and uses a wheelchair at the base before boarding his X-Wing.

Poe stared in despair as the wreckage of Wexley’s ship peppered down against the Destroyer’s hull.
Cries of terror and despair were lighting up his comm. They were getting torn apart.
“General!” Tyce called. “Do we retreat?”
“What now?” Someone called.
“What’s our next move?”
His people – his friends – were dying all around him.
“My friends,” Poe said, his voice tremulous. “My ankle still hurts.”