Third chapter:
https://pastebin.com/yR7LjhL3
Password: CaptainFaraday
Changelog:
- I rolled together different parts of a few chapters to fix the pacing issues created by removing lightspeed skipping. Unfortunately, I didn’t write it down as I was going, and now I have forgotten exactly what came from where. Oh dear.
- Removed lightspeed skipping.
- Removed Klaud.
- Made the asteroid an abandoned mine, rather than an active First Order mine.
- Removed the chess game so I can potentially use it somewhere later.
- General quality of life edits as previously described, continued condensing bit characters in the Resistance into a smaller number of characters who each get a bit more pagetime.
- Removed the implication that Boolio retrieved the information himself, instead of just passing it along.
- The information being retrieved is now a copy of Palpatine’s transmission to the First Order.