Oh yeah, do you plan on editing the novels for TFA and TLJ?
No plans right now for those, I don’t have much of an issue with them. I like TFA as it is, and while there are things I’d change about TLJ, I don’t feel the same urge to rewrite it as I do TROS.
Weirdly, though, I find I tend to prefer the junior novelisations (I read them to my son) because they’re a lot more direct and let the characters’ actions convey how they feel. Doing an edit where I inserted the best parts of the big print from TFA and TLJ’s novelisations into their junior novelisations would be an odd, but perhaps quite rewarding, project to do someday.