RL, what do you think about this as a crawl idea for TFA?

Luke Skywalker has vanished.
Led by the Sith Cultist Snoke
the FIRST ORDER has risen
from the ashes of the Empire
and will not rest until Skywalker,
the last Jedi, has been destroyed.

To maintain peace the New
Re and First Order have
signed a treaty of non-interference.
General Leia Organa
leads a brave RESISTANCE
against the new threat.

Desperate to find her
brother, Leia has sent her most
daring forces to search for Luke
on JAKKU, where scavengers and
brigands ransack the remnants
of the old war….