I agree with Kalee. It directly helps the setup for the Mortis arc where her vision tells her Anakin has imparted some really bad habits that if not corrected could ruin her. Blatant disobedience because she thinks she knows best is absolutely one of them. Maybe make it a cold open? That could help with the pacing. (It also helps setup the idea that the council might have less reason to trust her than Ahsoka thinks for when Wrong Jedi rolls around.)

That actually reminds me, do you have any thoughts for making it appear Ahsoka has, even only briefly, some PTSD thanks to dying on Mortis? The only real fallout from that is arc is Anakin trying to ground her during Citadel and his fear for her during the Youngling Hunt. She kinda shrugs it off and it’s always bothered me.

Another thing is, I just realised Padme doesn’t appear in your S1. That’s something that bothers me from the perspective of her being one of the four main characters of TCW, and one of three of the PT. It bothers me a bit less from the perspective of it being a war that is canonically keeping Anakin and Padme apart for long periods of time, heightening his jealousy with the two Clovis arcs.

And the finally, an Ahsoka question. Will you be trimming/removing the Ahsoka/Lux flirting? After tyr first episode where she turned him down it just felt very forced, and for myself as much as Anakin influenced her, I don’t think romance is something Ahsoka would actually really consider until after RotS as briefly depicted in the Ahsoka novel.

Sorry, I know my thoughts jump around from one place to another…

(Once again wishing that the final Cad Bane and Ventress arcs had been fully produced…)