I like the ambition, the tough part will be the multiple trips back and forth to the Rebel Alliance for the first couple of phases.
I enjoy RogueOne the most and view it as the “better” movie of the “Disney” Star Wars overall (Felt like Star Wars, IMO) These edits are just to either help flesh it out a bit and “sand off” some of the bad, but man, overall a much better and enjoyable movie.
As for Jynn, trying to help her be less passive would be nice to do. Granted, at the end she does have a more active role, but it would have been nice a little bit earlier, or at least even in a small way to progress her “full in” at the end.