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Post #1408672

Author
EddieDean
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE]
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Date created
7-Feb-2021, 5:50 AM

Hah! I love how often you guys give great suggestions just as I’m thinking the same thing. I’m literally editing those parts right now, and had come to the same conclusion. I’m going to minimise Wat Tambor, but you’re exactly right, this Neimoidian is competent and has an interesting character, so I’m preserving him.

The other 180 I’m doing on a previous decision in this episode is that I’m keeping the SkyGuy/Snips nicknames. I think their introduction on Christophsis was more adversarial and less about representing a bond, whereas they’ve earned one now. Now, Ahsoka first calls him SkyGuy after they grow together during the Malevolence crisis, and sometime after that he’s started calling her Snips. Without the adversarial introduction I almost read it like “little sister”.