Well, this period of editing has been a big success. I’ve chopped out all of the unwanted scenes from Supply Lines, leaving just the Cham/Bail ones, ready to insert into Storm.

I had written out in this post a bonus scene I’m quite proud of, but actually I think I’ll leave it a suprise. But suffice to say, those wishing for a little more value to the Toydarians should be pleased - I think I’ve found a way to emphasise their nobility whilst minimising their goofiness and Jar Jar’s scenes. (And avoid the fact that we’ve literally just seen Katuunko die.)