“Children of Dathomir” was great. Despite the runtime, it never felt lagging or slow. That’s probably in part because the original arc is solidly written, but you also did a pretty good work at tying the three episodes together. The middle section in particular worked surprisingly well, even with most of the trial scene trimmed down one gets to care about Savage and Feral’s bond.

I only noticed one glaring technical bug: when Delta Squad meets with the Jedi, there’s an empty black frame as their ship is approaching.

Maybe you could change the lead up to the credits music in this one (it would fit since this is a season finale with a darker ending), though it may just be myself not getting used to hear Ahsoka’s theme over an ominous scene of Savage and Talzin lol