For the scene en route to Eadu maybe you could switch Draven’s dialogue around so that he says: “Tell him to proceed with haste and keep to the plan, tell him my orders still stand”. That way there’s emphasis on these mysterious orders but we don’t find out what they are yet.
Here’s a crude version of how it could play out:
https://vimeo.com/507707620
Post #1407461
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- Burbin
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- Hal’s Rogue One edit (a half-assed version of DigMod’s) (Released)
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