Greetings!
Those are all good changes/fixes to the movies. I agree there’s some love in these movies … just need to “trim the fat” with them. Based on your cutlist/alterations it’s pretty more or less the agreed about necessities to help out these movies.
An interesting idea that stuck out is #3 from Revenge of the Sith about Anakin not threatening Palps. Curious to see how it flows, since one thing that sticks out would be how Mace and the other’s ‘know’ that Palps is the Sith they’ve been looking for, since Anakin revealed that to them.