An interesting and “potent”(Idk what other word could describe it) edit I think many would enjoy would be to include the Fortnite Final Order message, but instead of having it be in the beginning or middle portions of the movie, it would be inserted into Palps monologue before he casts his Force Storm, omitting a few words from the Fortnite message as to avoid repetition. Something like: “The great error is corrected. The day of victory is at hand. The day of revenge… Do not fear their feeble attack my faithful, nothing will stop the return of the Sith!” (Optional Red Force Storm)

I feel this edit would 1) Flesh out an already great scene and 2) would add that extra Sheev charisma present in the previous films

EDIT TO ADD: “The Great Error” could have a triple meaning; meaning the Skywalker legacy/Anakin, Rey, and the Jedi