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Post #1405906

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RogueLeader
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE]
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Date created
26-Jan-2021, 6:54 PM

Kinda echoing sade, I also see the merit of not having the cold open, and potentially having one test like you had it in that one version.

On its own I preferred the version with two tests, but after watching the whole episode, I kinda do see the merit in there just being one test. If there was one test, I think it would be interesting to keep Commander Colt’s pep talk, as well as Bravo Team’s test.

But I know you’ve already made progress on how it is now, and I think it is good the way it is! But I actually had really similar thoughts to sade, so I figured I would share them.