The blue text mentions Rex “patrolling” facilities, but shouldn’t it be “inspecting”?
I feel the “Two weeks later” could use a second or two more black screen before the visuals of the next scene start. Also perhaps surge of music just before this (as we focus on Hevy’s face) to further the idea that 99’s words have landed.
Other than that I was very pleased with everything - it felt contained and better than the three original episodes