I’m not a great fan of adding trailer music to movies but I’d say your effort works pretty well Brewzter. Maybe you could introduce the theme a bit earlier so it flows better into the Victory theme that follows it.
I agree though that the Force theme is egregiously overused in the sequel trilogy and to make matters worse, the version that plays after Palpatine is defeated is sampled directly from Luke’s death in TLJ. It should be changed.