Hey Hal, not sure if you saw JakeRyan’s trimming of the “All Sith/The Jedi” line, but any thoughts on using that idea? The line is still godawful, but somehow cutting out that one word makes it a lot less cringey (to me, at least).
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xQZgJAc1umsYUKpgjEEc8DcrBCXnZsrg/view?usp=sharing>
OMG this is my first time seeing that change and it is SO much better than the original line. It also echo’s Luke’s line to Palpatine in ROTJ: “I am a Jedi, like my father before me.”
Amazing how much more effective that scene is with that little change. I got chills.
Sounds like Hal doesn’t like it though. However, I would absolutely be willing to release my own fanedit—built upon Hal’s final release—entirely for that change alone.