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Post #1402595

Author
jarbear
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
13-Jan-2021, 10:02 AM

Not bad at all, it’s pretty good implantation and the tracking is done pretty nicely with just a few spots a little off. Right on.

I will say though, it does feel a bit “off” when you see most of her body. It does feel like it’s all too blurry and all especially with the background being blurry too.

If I could think of a suggestion, what if you implement her just first entering into the room when she is moving, basically when most of her body is covered by Finn/bench. Before it cuts to Han, you just see her “head walking in” that shows the audience she is coming into the room.

This allows the “blurry-ness” of Rey moving (just her “floating head” part) and allows you to not have the background/corridor to be blurry.