RogueLeader said:
I agree that if you could cite or mute his line, asking for her help, might alleviate the whiplash feeling you get when he says moments later “I had it under control!” I mean, I know this is whiny Anakin we’re talking about here, but still.Good shout, might see if I can remove that.
that line, “You wouldn’t have made it as Obi-Wan’s padawan, but you might make it as mine” would be a bit of a shame to lose.
I could maybe play that line over the two of them as they walk away, see if that works.
That would be fantastic. There have been raised valid point regarding the speed of him accepting her. If you could alter the original that way, great 😃