Knight of Kalee said:
Thoughts on Domino

Thanks Knight. I have to confess, I didn’t rewatch Rookies yet, so I might be skipping it too swiftly. It does have some good bits - mainly the infiltration of the commandos and the assault. Less so the worms, if I remember right.

I absolutely want to preserve the clones being referred to as “bad batchers” and “a bad batch” from Clone Cadets.

I think to solve the rushed feeling, I do intend to have title cards to split the episodes. “At the beginning of the Clone War”, “One month later”, and “Present day”, I think.

Maybe I should take a look at the whole arc in the editing deck, and pick out the key bits that way, then let that define the structure. I don’t think it’s going to be a tricky technical edit, just the removal of some scenes. There’s nothing complex to be done with this episode, it’s more about planning it right than executing the plan.