That sounds right to me. Another thing I’d have changed, as this was just a pet-peeve when I first saw the movie, is that the music should be more evil and ominous when Kylo kills Snoke. It feels like whiplash when it’s portrayed as heroic and then he’s bad immediately after.
There are some really bizarre soundtrack decisions in this film. Like the one you mentioned, there’s a couple other segments that are just oddly silent or have unfitting music. I’ll definitely be examining my options for fixing some of this. My TFA edit had a lot of audio and soundtrack work done, especially in the final starkiller sequences and I thought that really helped so I’ll be doing something similar here. Will definitely take your suggestion into consideration when I get to that scene as I can’t recall what it sounds like now, thanks.