I virtually agree with all of sade’s feedback, so I won’t say much because it would be kind of redundant lol. The frame difference is a bit noticeable but I don’t really think most viewers are gonna catch that, or be taken out of the story because of it. And yeah the last scene with Bail is a bit clunky but forgivable, and honestly reworking the Bail subplot from Cat and Mouse was done pretty great.
Don’t worry - I’ll include it in a much fuller form as part of the complete cut. Since you’re our resident Grievous fan, what changes would you like to see made to Lair, if any?
There’s quite a few things I’d like to change about Lair but I’d rather wait til you start working on the complete cut 😄