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Post #1401013

Author
NeverarGreat
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
8-Jan-2021, 4:20 PM
Last modified
8-Jan-2021, 4:20 PM
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NeverarGreat
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DZ-330 said:

Could Finn’s “you gotta boyfriend? a cute boyfriend?” be removed? A Rey/Finn romance is never established in the ST and it feels out of place. Plus it always felt kinda odd for Finn to be concerned about that during that moment.

My version cuts out the ‘cute boyfriend’ addendum but leaves the first mention, which I think works well. Taking out the whole boyfriend line doesn’t really work, since the scene becomes too abrupt without it.