Christophsis sounds like it’s coming together really well. And I do think that the ending with Bail works! Like I said, Anakin turning his head really does help to sell the merge.
Also, thank you for taking the time to consider my notes! Yours is the first project I’ve been able to watch as it’s in development (in the past, I’ve only discovered fanedits after they’re completed), so I hope I was able to help a little. Can’t wait to see more!