That is extremely cool, and your version of the entire opening works well!
For TROS:A I’d love to add just the modified RO castle shot and add the castle over Kylo’s shoulder. I wonder if the RO shot could even lose the red glow, as though it’s just dead and static inside even?
I think this is the best middle-ground choice possible, though I wouldn’t mind to see the concept art Cinefy posted come to life.