So, i watched ep02 also and first of all like others said, great work you deliver here. Technically as well as narrative wise. Not one second felt boring. I was also surprised how good it work to cut out the spiders completely.
my overall nitpicks (that’s what they are, nothing more) have been covered by sade and knight of kalee.

one that wasn’t picked up before - if i’m not mistaken - you corrected yourself:

the hyperspace jump and travel inside hyperspace before the cut to obi-wan and anakin. far better this way
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Onz06QMKo719d4dN7syDfKs-Fj7uevgZ/view?usp=sharing

my other suggestion you fixed yourself, too:

the transition audio wise from end of the episode to credits. feels way better and smoother

Although i like the suggestion from samo21 (first track from samuel kim in the link), because it could be tricky to always find the right transition from end of an episode to credits. depending on the episode itself of course. perhaps there is a possibility to fuse the two tracks.
my suggestion would be try to add your track after 0:26/27/28 of samuel kims song and see how this plays out.
because i think the beginning (first two seconds) of his song would be perfect to every ending, cause it feels general.

last but not least i’ve got two remaining things to add:

am i delusional or is the intro and outro volume higher than the episode volume?
regarding wipes in the episode, i personally think it works best if someone uses the same wipe transition over the course of the entire episode. but that’s up for discussion because after all it’s a personal preference.

Edit: A third thing occurred to me. i watched the episode on my uhd samsung tv via nvidia shield pro. i thought i spotted 6-8 (maybe more) framerate issues (frame drops). perhaps @sade could shed light to it if he watched the episode via mpc-hc again?

Other than all the above, i’m thankful that you took upon this project. it is a real joy.