Hi there, just watched THE DEATH WATCH.
I found this to be overall quite enjoyable and definitely along the lines of what I always wished TCW was, a tight and focused show focused on quality story telling and not padding episode count or length. I appreciate your efforts to make this a reality!

I think most of my thoughts have already been covered by others, but have a couple notes I don’t think I saw:

In the ‘crawl’, maybe it should say “thousands of worlds remain neutral” instead of REPUBLIC worlds, as these systems are neutral and not aligning with the Republic or Separatists.
Also - should “Council of Neutral Systems” perhaps be capitalized in some way? It seems like a proper organization.

In the scene where they find the empty crate on Satine’s ship, I wonder if there’s a way to clean it up so we don’t hear a description of what’s (not) in the box twice within about 10 seconds?

The music over the end credits is fine but I kind of miss the somewhat up beat or exciting theme that plays in the Mandalorian. Wondering if there’s something from the clone wars we could put here instead?

Maybe something like the first track in this video?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=70CJDNLrkdg