Oh fantastic, you fixed the framerate issues!
The Mandalore clip is looking great. I still feel the cut away from the jetpacks and helmet shot feels a little premature but I don’t really know what you can do about that. TCW has a lot of weird editing anyway, as we’ve previously discovered. Perhaps if the subsequent shot of Satine was slightly longer it’d feel less like a sudden increase in pace, but I guess that one’s been trimmed for the music? Similarly, the music feels like it dips out oddly just before “Satine, look out!” but I suppose that’s a difficulty with the source. Could you cut to Satine sooner, or cut to Satine later into that shot, to bring the music in sooner?
The rest is flawlessly executed though, there’s no sense that there used to be a conveyor belt sequence.