Thanks sade. I’ve tweaked that second of your points to have his dialogue start after we see his mouth not moving.

On the first, I can’t make the shot longer, because it cuts immediately to Obi-Wan looking at a helmet directly then getting jumped. I had to keep those two shots together otherwise the jump comes too quickly interrupting Satine and Viszla. I’ve shifted the musical cue a little later though, so that the peak of interest from the audio comes as the helmet becomes obvious to the viewer, to draw our minds to it more. I think that’s about as far as I can take it, so I think that’s this episode as good as it can get. So long as there’s nothing in the existing content that people think absolutely does not work, I think this is the v1 version.

I now need to fix these bastard framerate and black issues, before moving on and finalising the opening and closing credits.