Right, while letting other tasks do their thing, I’ve taken a closer look at the necessary cuts to the Malevolence arc - our episode four.
All of the wheat, none of the chaff. And Grievous got to be a savage who just got overwhelmed by superior firepower.
I’m really on board with your suggestion of trimming the arc in a way that keeps Grievous 😉
Haha, no worries. I don’t want to do anything too radical with these edits. As I’ve said before, I don’t want to break its relationships with other canon, though I don’t mind changing little things. For example in my Malevolence episode, having Abregado near to Naboo. (I don’t know if it is officially.) But I think changing the ordering, and cutting out certain sequences, are going to be necessary to make this a stronger show.