EddieDean, great work so far! I am sure I won’t have quite a list of nitpicks as sade1212, but I do have some.

Before I Begin

My opinion and nitpicks are my own thoughts on it. You may have other views on the matter, but these are mine. I loved the work that EddieDean put into this so far. Keep it up!

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Fixes for Mandalore episode 02

Wipe Transition needs to be slowed down a bit 3:57, 4:43 & 10:13
A weird cut when Obi-wan is mounting the speeder 9:53
10:31 - 10:44 Should be moved and placed after 11:28 in my opinion for flow of story and editing
13:28 - 14:07 Is a bundle of mess. I can see how the scene plays out, however where/when did the second bounty hunter come in? The pacing is off and needs rework.
It looks like a Quick Cut and needs to be fixed 24:18

Other than that great work! My favorite segment of the episode is 28:14, “Go save your girlfriend…” still gets to me haha.

Thanks for reading this and hope to see further progress on this! Happy New Years to everyone!