The clip flows very well. It keeps the better part of the action and most important of all feels like entertaining Star Wars.

Maybe I missed or forgot a detail, but who is meant to be Ventress’ informant that she mentioned? The traitorous clone sargeant was cut.

I agree with the suggestions made about the wording of the opening crawl.

And I don’t think every instance of the droids speaking or providing comic relief should be cut, only if they actively interrupt the flow of the action. I’ve just come to terms with the fact they’re laughable antagonists and little more than cannon fodder. Same for stormtroopers in Rebels, the sequel trilogy and Mandalorian.