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Post #1398272

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ADR14NAT1ON
Parent topic
The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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Date created
30-Dec-2020, 9:36 PM

That’s true. Your approach is actually more in par with what was done in Solo than the main film series. It still has that vocabulary I mentioned, though.
One thing I just realized is that with Maul making an appearance at the end, your similar crawl could be another cool visual tie to the series. However, I don’t expect you to look to that film for inspiration. IMO it’s very forgettable.

As for the length of the text, I think that around the same amount of text that a traditional narration has would be alright. I think yours for ep1 is great.